Saturday, February 11, 2012

Please help me is it correct grammatically ?

Don’t ever regret on a love you have lived...Even if it turned to a memories that hurts you … if the flowers had become dry and lost its perfume and nothing remains but thorns...don't forget that one day it gave you a lovely perfume that blessed you

Don’t ever break all the bridges with whom you love …one day fate may will for you to meet again … a day to restore what had passed and to connect what had separated... who can guess .. If the great lifetime moved away there may be a greatest one is waiting for you

If you decided one day to leave your dear alone don’t ever left him any wounds … Since who gave you a heart doesn’t deserve to set an arrow in his heart or to left him a painful moment that makes him miserable



How beautiful it's when you keep the lovely times …

If time separated you … keep in your mind all the good things for who you had loved and don’t talk about him except if about good deeds

Please help me is it correct grammatically ?
Don’t ever regret a love you have lived...Even if it turns to a memories that hurts you … if the flowers have become dry and lost its perfume and nothing remains but thorns...don't forget that one day they gave you a lovely perfume that blessed you

Don’t ever break all the bridges with the one whom you loved …one day fate may enable you to meet again … a day to restore the past and to reconnect those who had separated... who can guess .. If the great time of your life has moved on there may be a greater one awaiting you

If you decided one day to leave your dear one alone don’t ever leave him to suffer any wounds … For he who gave you a heart doesn’t deserve to feel an arrow in his heart or to endure a painful time that makes him wretched.



How beautiful it is when you preserve the lovely times …

If time has separated you … keep in your mind all the good things about the one whom you loved and don’t talk about him except in a good way.
Reply:Don’t ever regret a love that you have lived even if it turned out to be memories that hurts you. If the flowers dried up and lost its perfume and nothing remains but thorns, don't forget that one day it will give you a lovely perfume that blesses you.

Don’t ever break all the bridges with whom you love for one day, fate will build one for you to meet again, a day to restore what had destroyed and to connect what had separated. Who can guess? If the great lifetime moved away, there may be a greater one waiting for you.

If you decided one day to leave your dear alone, don’t ever leave him with any wounds since the one who gave you a heart doesn’t deserve to have an arrow in his heart or to be in a painful moment that will make him miserable.

How beautiful it is when you keep the lovely times. If time separated you, keep in your heart all the good memories with the one you loved.



...i have changed some words that is, for me, more suitable...it's really up to you to accept my corrections or not...


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