Monday, February 13, 2012

Is it correct grammatically?

Don’t ever regret on a love you have lived...Even if it turned to a memories that hurts you … if the flowers had become dry and lost its perfume and nothing remains but thorns...don't forget that one day it gave you a lovely perfume that blessed you

Don’t ever break all the bridges with whom you love …one day fate may will for you to meet again … a day to restore what had passed and to connect what had separated... who can guess .. If the great lifetime moved away there may be a greatest one is waiting for you

If you decided one day to leave your dear alone don’t ever left him any wounds … Since who gave you a heart doesn’t deserve to set an arrow in his heart or to left him a painful moment that makes him miserable



How beautiful it's when you keep the lovely times …

If time separated you … keep in your mind all the good things for who you had loved and don’t talk about him except if about good deeds

Is it correct grammatically?
even though it is not correct it is deep......... a great piece of work.......
Reply:Lots of grammatical errors - too many to enumerate.
Reply:Don’t ever regret a love you have lived...Even if it turns to a memory that hurts you … If the flowers become dry and lose their perfume and nothing remains but thorns, don't forget that once they gave you a lovely and blessing perfume.


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