Try an make a poem of any style using atleast four of these words:
Mother
Splitters
Vermillion
Guilt
Dry
Flowers
Terrible
Exaltation
Lament
Iridescent
Cut-purse
Creative writting!! only a bit of fun. want to join?
crying, a mother of two,
torn from them,never ending sorrow.
tears of rage,tears of sadness,
both of them never knew.
she held the guilt in her head,
the blood fresh on the blade.
their little bodies spread about the flowers that they gave.
dry was the air, the splitters walking about,
sifting through the blood stain flowers,
always looking out.
the vermilion seeping out,
their bodies still. a terrible death to die,
that very thought made them ill.
exaltation was never there, never a laugh
, only blank stares.
now everyone knew of that grove,
the little one, near the pond.
the boys were helpless,dragged and gagged.
she thought,the mother, and lamenting came.
the iridescent sun on the water,
the soft dripping of the water.
that cut-purse that killed them.
every thin was not.everything was spinning
.no one there to comfort, her kids were not there.
she had no hope,only nothing
,but something kept her there.
maybe it was the thought,
the thought that this was not there.
the thought that nothing happened,
and they were there.
they were there be her side, not by the red pool.
Reply:Guilt Drys the Flowers of Happiness
Mother holds a Child of Hope
Laughs brings the warmth of Love
Love brings the Hope of Peace
Reply:flowers for mother
mother brings guilt
guilt bleeds the heart
the pain brings death
Reply:Vermilion stains the mother's dress
Her son dies in her arms
An iridescent pool of tears
Exclaiming her alarm
That terrible and fateful day
She will now lament
His red robes splay across the tar
Holy, heaven sent
The flowers on the altar show
An exaltation high
No guilt, but compassion now
She asks the Chinese why
Tuesday, February 7, 2012
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