Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Creative writting!! only a bit of fun. want to join?

Try an make a poem of any style using atleast four of these words:



Mother

Splitters

Vermillion

Guilt

Dry

Flowers

Terrible

Exaltation

Lament

Iridescent

Cut-purse

Creative writting!! only a bit of fun. want to join?
crying, a mother of two,

torn from them,never ending sorrow.

tears of rage,tears of sadness,

both of them never knew.

she held the guilt in her head,

the blood fresh on the blade.

their little bodies spread about the flowers that they gave.

dry was the air, the splitters walking about,

sifting through the blood stain flowers,

always looking out.

the vermilion seeping out,

their bodies still. a terrible death to die,

that very thought made them ill.

exaltation was never there, never a laugh

, only blank stares.

now everyone knew of that grove,

the little one, near the pond.

the boys were helpless,dragged and gagged.

she thought,the mother, and lamenting came.

the iridescent sun on the water,

the soft dripping of the water.

that cut-purse that killed them.

every thin was not.everything was spinning

.no one there to comfort, her kids were not there.

she had no hope,only nothing

,but something kept her there.

maybe it was the thought,

the thought that this was not there.

the thought that nothing happened,

and they were there.

they were there be her side, not by the red pool.
Reply:Guilt Drys the Flowers of Happiness

Mother holds a Child of Hope

Laughs brings the warmth of Love

Love brings the Hope of Peace
Reply:flowers for mother

mother brings guilt

guilt bleeds the heart

the pain brings death
Reply:Vermilion stains the mother's dress

Her son dies in her arms

An iridescent pool of tears

Exclaiming her alarm



That terrible and fateful day

She will now lament

His red robes splay across the tar

Holy, heaven sent



The flowers on the altar show

An exaltation high

No guilt, but compassion now

She asks the Chinese why


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